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You're my what?
(#) axelrajr 2009-05-17
an abrupt ending.
i will definitely be keeping an eye out for the next one. there were enough elements in there that i figure that there will be more to the ending than meets the eye.
one thing to note, i wonder what will happen when and if there is a recording of the event, and tonks is found to be the one that off'ed the dark lord?You're my what?
(#) oldmetalhead 2009-05-17
I agree. Too abrupt of an ending. I have enjoyed the story, and will be expecting that sequel, soon. LOL.
I like this pairing (tri-bond), and how you have written it. Good work.
You're my what?
(#) Shadowdrake 2009-05-18
The story is really well thought out and I enjoyed reading it a lot. Thanks for sharing.
I do however have to agree that the last chapter was a bit abrupt. The combat scene was also confusing, but I'm not certain if you intended that. If you take the time to improve that scene, I think the feeling of abruptness will go.
That said, I must congratulate you to your idea. The way you handled the prophecy is original and as far as I know has never been written before. And I just love stories that proof that prophecies can not be understood correctly before they have come to pass.You're my what?
(#) radiofishlip 2009-05-18
abrupt is one way of saying it but i dont think it quite captures the abruptness of the endingYou're my what?
(#) Cateagle 2009-05-18
Just a thought, I don't believe all the Horcruxes have been accounted for, so I can see Tommy-boy returning yet again. On the other hand, the demise of this version seems to have removed 'most all of his marked supporters and radically reduced the attraction he has, so I can see where he'll have a rather more difficult time when he does return; this will also give thePotter trio more time to get used to each other and what their bond enables them to do.You're my what?
(#) LordSeagen 2009-05-18
So does this mean the story is over? I sure hope not. But if it is I can see how Tonks was able to kill Voldemort. Harry said that he replaced one of the damaged hairs with his own. So Tonks wand was in actuality a Harry powered wand. Good work. Can't wait to read another story from you.You're my what?
(#) Pointer 2009-05-21
Great story. Hilarious ending. The power he knows not is making a wand that can punch through Riddle's defenses. Priceless.You're my what?
(#) drifter 2009-05-23
Everyone has figured that wand used by Tonks to down Moldy-shorts was effective because Harry made it and because harry inserted one of his own hairs when Tonk's fathers hair was to damaged.
What I find strange is that no-one has accounted for “all” the horacruxes including the one in Harry's head.
Tho I do wonder if Harry's got absorbed or thrown out when he went through the Veela change?
(HUGE GRIN) I understood a part of the girls paling but your A/R to Jabarber69 clarified it nicely, thanks.
So, thanks for the terrific read. Definitely going to find more that you posted.
May the MUSE always be with you!!!
~!^You're my what?
(#) drifter 2009-05-24
Everyone has to have something to vitch about, but I stand corrected about the Horcruxes.
Dumble's took care of the diary, Slytherin’s ring, and Rowena Ravenclaw’s diadem. The snake is wand holsters, and Harry got a bo .., er, shot to the head.
Was it Slytherin's locket that got destroyed in the fight between Fletcher and the house elf, Creature? Or one of the other items indicated by canon or other good fanfic's? OR .. Is there one still out there?
I ask just to be sure I got things right.
Anyway, again thanks for a darn good read that is going into my favorites. I am definitely going to find that sequel.
May the MUSE always be with you!!!
~!^
You're my what?
(#) grenouille 2009-06-07
Interesting story, but the abrupt ending was rather disappointing. I look forward to the sequel, as there are quite a few loose ends to clear up. Well done, otherwise.
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