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Black, Gray and White
(#) ICBB 2009-05-19
Nice chapter! It was hilarious! Especially the perverted goblin...
Black, Gray and White
(#) siledubhghlase 2009-05-19
Ragnok, you bad boy...
Never slap the asses of women standing over cauldrons. The situation can become...explosive. So much for their perfect potion.
At least Gabby put some good locks on her USB stick. However, if Hermione doesn't retrieve it soon, they might crack that 1024 code. If it were up to me, though, Bellatrix and Violette could have a cat fight to the death.
Narcissa looks as though she'd been either royally worked over or she escaped from someone. I hope she's on the up and up, because you don't want to piss off highly-trained Unspeakable War Mages.
Good chapter!Author's response
LOL explosive situation indeed.
Bellatrix and Violette cat fight... they kind of did already on chapter 12, but I'm thinking of a different kind of cat fight...hmmm lemme see about that.Black, Gray and White
(#) stick97 2009-05-19
Poor lonely Hermione, working herself to death all alone.
But at least she is not with Ron!
Right?Black, Gray and White
(#) issabissa 2009-05-21
AN interesting chapter!!!! Keep up the great work! I hope to see more of it soon!Black, Gray and White
(#) Cateagle 2009-05-21
Methinks Narcissa is about to get a divorce or annulment and become, once again, a proud member of the Black family, and most certainly one who can provide Harry with some useful assistance in dealing with puerbloods and wizarding culture in general. chuckle I do hope Harry learned his lesson that there are times when keeping ones hands to ones self is an advisable thing. Meanwhile, I think I'd put a final "Masada-style" protection on that USB stick - if you don'tknow the proper key, it goes up like a decidedly larger stick of high explosive (then again, I've dealt with a few secure containers with that on them).Black, Gray and White
(#) DragonsFlame89 2009-05-22
hurry up i want MORE!!!!
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funny as hell and its just getting better the longer it gos onBlack, Gray and White
(#) AKindOfMagic78 2009-06-13
Hmm... is her name still Malfoy? Not Black...?
Great story. Great plot. Great writing style. OK, chapters are a bit shortly ;)
Sorry, but Gabby 14 years old and Harry 16 don't really work. All sources -partly official- I have read, say, that Gabby is 6 years younger than Harry. E.g.: »...born in the year 1986...«; »...turns 11 in the summer of '97...« (concerning the Beauxbatons-letter)
If I understood your timeline right, we are in the summer before Harry's "7th year" - where he should turn 17 in july!?
Well, I'm far away from being a nerd, but if a 512-bit-encryption takes a million years then should a 1024-bit-encryption take "a bit" more time -g-
I'm looking forward for every new chapter!
"Mischief managed"
AKOM
PS: Sorry for grammar etc. - English is my 2nd foreign language.
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