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• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) agouraki2 2009-05-23

  you just proved finally there can be a quality star trek/harry potter crossover congratulations
  
  
  i hope you can keep up the good work
  
  
  
  PS. don't make it drama. go harry/hui!

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) DrT 2009-05-23

  Good chapter, and I love 'Dreadnaught' and its sequel!

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) red_jacobson 2009-05-23

  Outstanding Chapter! Really looking forward to seeing what happens next, and wouldn't mind seeing a bit of Uhura's reaction to Hui.
  
  This is one of the most original stories I've had the pleasure of reading, and thanks for writing it for us.
  
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• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) erik 2009-05-23

  Great chapter with some details that I had missed after drifting away from the franchise.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Cateagle 2009-05-23

  chuckle I quite enjoyed this chapter in all aspects. The bit with the fighter, and Kirk's referring to it later was inspired (heh, when you've got one of the best pilots in the Fleet, that kind of thing can happen - plus Harry has a most tenacious push to win and using an experimental fighter beats modifying the programming for a simulation - mind you, I quite enjoyed the way the novel "Kobyashi Maru" described osme fo the other TOS bridge crew taking their tests, Scotty's was especially good and fun). Harry & Hui make a good pair and I can't help but look forward to where they go from here (wonder if she'll be snatched back in time with him?) and how they'll deal together with the remnants fo Tommy-boy.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you liked it. Now harry is going to eventually go to command school. I'm thinking that Command school is similar in nature to the army's command and staff college, where only senior 0-3 (Captain) through newly promoted 0-5 (Lt.Col) would go if they were noted for higher command. Harry will still have to do the Kobashi Maru, but all things considered, He'll pass it in a way that No one will expect.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Imbrium 2009-05-23

  Still enjoying the story... Hopefully now that Harry has graduated we'll get to see this go somewhere! I'm looking forward to see what happens.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) BenRG 2009-05-23

  I think that you did the right thing skipping through the rest of Harry's academy years, although I would have given the Orion incident its own chapter as I suspect it will turn out to be very important.
  
  So! Harry's getting hitched! To a descendent of Luna Lovegood no less! That should be... intersesting... as his Vulcan friends might say. ;) Of course, there is still the final mission to be carried out. Before then, there is the first mission assignment!
  
  BenRG's Rating: 7.5/10
  
  Note: Standard proceedure would be for graduates to get an Ensign (O1) rank. However, those of particularly high skill and the best results in their tests may be automatically skipped up to Lieutanant, Junior Grade (O2) at graduation. Up to you which happens to Harry, of course.
  
  Harry looked around the bridge of the USS Dauntless and was aware of a discontinuity in his memories, just what should be expected from travelling through a time warp. He coughed, blinked and looked around him. "Status report, people?"
  
  His helmsman, a tall and slightly gangly human from the low-gravity world of Reach looked down at his panel. "Sir, the braking thrusters have fired. We're just crossing Venus's orbit at low impulse."
  
  Harry nodded and turned to his science officer. "Stendec? When are we?"
  
  "Stand by, Captain," the Vulcan replied. "Based on the polutant content of Earth's atmosphere, I judge that we are in the closing decade of the 20th Century. Based on the position of known Earth space probes and Vulcan subspace beacons, I believe that we are somewhere in the first half of the Earth year 1996."
  
  There was a bleep from the navigator's console. "Lt. Voight?"
  
  Tara looked up from her displays. "Sir, we have the Reman ship on long-range sensors. She's holding station at the Moon's L2 liberation point."
  
  Harry nodded. "Very well, Lieutenant. Engage cloaking device. Helm. Plot an approach to standard orbit."

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2009-05-23

  Why has Harry not gone to any Wizarding bank or searched if there is still a Wizarding bank?
  
  Why were none of Harry's thangs from the past setup so Harry could get them in the future?
  
  

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) starboy454 2009-05-23

  KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) OneEye 2009-05-23

  @Robert_1958: Please re-read chapter 9. Harry hasn't gone to the bank because the goblins shut them down and sealed themselves into their caverns. There are no wizarding banks anymore.
  
  OneEye (the beta reader)

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