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Searching for the Power
(#) siledubhghlase 2009-05-23
The implications of Harry's "dream" with Gabrielle...there are a few possibilites:
1. She's easing Harry into "goodbye."
2. She communication with him the only way she can right now.
3. There's something new developing with the bond.
Gabrielle's held on longer than I thought she would. The longer she holds on, the better chance she's got for survival. I'm just concerned now that she can't wake up.
Sniff, sob.
Great chapter.Author's response
You are right! Very good guess!
As always I love your reviews Shiela, thanks for making me ruin it for everyone else but you are 100% right with answer #.....mmmphSearching for the Power
(#) DJ32 2009-05-23
OK that is the 3 chapters you warned up about. So does that mean we get some happy now? Any way nice work and thanks for writing.Author's response
hmmmmmmm There is definitely a little bit of happiness headed your way...
BEWARE THE DREADED OPEN ELIPSE, FOR WHEN NOTHING FOLLOWS DANGER BE AHEAD! MUHUWAHAHAHAHA
btw "..." is an elipse...
p.s.
That wasn't necessarily directed at you DJ, some people may not know what an elipse is...
RAWR! I hate making myself look like an idiot. eLLipsIs ellipsis ellipsis
as opposed to the shape... Look how much response you got from just a few words. No wasn't that totally worth it to make me look like a fool DJ?
hehe...DJ?
...Searching for the Power
(#) DrT 2009-05-23
Poor Harry (not to mention Gabby!) Hopefully things will brighten in the next chapter or so!Searching for the Power
(#) starboy454 2009-05-23
PLEASE PLEASE DO NOT KILL HER OFF I CAN SEE THAT IT MITE MAKE HARRY GO DARK IF SHE DIEDS SOB SOBSearching for the Power
(#) Nautilus 2009-05-23
interesting beginning to the chapter.
looking forward to where you take this... maybe gabriel dies(in body) but remains true and real in his dreams or something...
i hope for a very magical solution with a little bit of muggle logic... congrats and can't wait.Author's response
mmmmpht mummmmmthmmm mmmamamrmmmrmmmrrrrmmm
Can't comment, but if you can deciper the above you will understand what I mean...Searching for the Power
(#) grookill 2009-05-23
I might guess that most folks are saying "don't kill Gabby off!"
Uh, my thinking is that you should do whatever you think is right. If I were writing the story, I probably would this on a little more and then let her die in peace. Why? It's war, and that's what happens.
It isn't so much that Harry loses someone close, this time it is Ginny, Hermione and Susan. I think they need to be hit with the reality that is known as the "horror that is war."
I'm looking forwards to the confrontation with Snape. If he says that he told Dumbledore, oh, boy! The term "fireworks" would be an understatement.
Good luck with the next chapter!Author's response
A very interesting view, thank you for sharing. Snape will likely be getting his reward soon.Searching for the Power
(#) zicou 2009-05-23
That was great,
I hope she will be cured soon!
Continuuuuuue,
Z.Searching for the Power
(#) starboy454 2009-05-24
THIS MAKE ME NUTS WEIGHTING FOR A NEW CH TO SEE WHATS HAPPEN NEXT YOU HAVE GRATE STORY HERE IJUST KEEP HOPING FOR A NEW CH SOONSearching for the Power
(#) issabissa 2009-05-24
LOve the story so far!!!!m You are doing a great job! Keep up the great work!
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