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Pieces Of Me
(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-05-25
you have to update i like this story, and william better find out soon, i mean COME ON!!!! its its his own kid and his wife sooo.... yeah update :)Pieces Of Me
(#) doyleangel 2009-06-02
Hey, new reader here. It's taken me a couple of days but i've FINALLY caught up on this story, and let me tell you. I LOVE IT!! Oh, every chapter I just couldn't wait to go on to the next. I'm so glad that Kelsi and William got together and then back together. I was a little worried that she was going to cheat on him or have a little something going on with Robert Pattinson, and was so glad when she didn't. I really hope that she doesn't do anything with Ryan either, she's married with a kid on the way. She loves William.
Anyway, can't wait for the next update!!Author's response
Awww, thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Yes, my loyal subject, more drama to come...maybe not so much with Kelsi and William, but with Pete and Ashlee...lol
xoxoPieces Of Me
(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-06-12
okay so i was reading the previous chapter and i think i found out y kelsi is having these pains... and also thnks 2 this stroy my new favorite song is metro stations song kelsey bes d=song ever i love mason mussos voice :DPieces Of Me
(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-06-14
okay just wondering the thing with pete did u get that from th news or something cuz me and my frend were at like white hen or something and it said something about their relationship was a "crisis"Author's response
Yeah, i saw it in that magazine and thats why i put it in there heehee...thnks for commenting and reading!Pieces Of Me
(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-07-12
so this is my 4th review on this story!!!! PLEASE can you update, please i really wanna know what happens next :( i miss this story i just re read the WHOLE thing please update pweasePieces Of Me
(#) chocolatechortle22 2009-07-24
so this is my 5th review but im bored and reminding u, you ned 2 update sorry if im a little impatient but this is such a good story and i really wanna know what happens but in the meanwhile i am going to just say what i THINK is going to happen. So William being a little suspicious goes over to Ryan's house and finds Kelsi there, and he gets all pissed at Ryan.then william and kelsi start yelling at eachother and get into this big fight then she suddenly gets that pain thing again but A LOT worse. bad enough where they need to take her to the hospital so they take her to the hospital and something dramatic happens like she loses the baby. but she lives then her and william make up. But the shes now all depressed bcuz she lost the baby then- yeah i dont know the ideas just started flowing. i think i watch to many movies i think thats where this all came from. so yeah update please for the 5th time :)Author's response
El Oh El, Sorry for the lack of updates...been working on a collabo story with PoeticTragdy...but you're getting vewwy warm with your apprehensions about the story. I'm glad you reviewed, it makes me happy to see someone is reading it. But I AM working on POM, dont worry, yo!
xoxo
ItsNikiYoooo
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