(#) canustakemyheart 2009-05-29Ha! This was great. I love stories that mess with reality like that.
Author's responseI'm ok with the possibility that a lot went on there that has never been told. Besides, it's fiction. There's got to be some artistic licence :)
Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're enjoying it! :)
ps - it's possible we still don't know what is real and what's not ;)
- Wow...this is quite good!
I really like how you take the time to describe the setting - all the pieces that make it up, like in the library with the books...it really helps to create a picture, a very detailed one at that, for the reader.
I can't wait to see what you do with it!!
Author's responseThanks! I find it quite tricky to add description in a conversational narrative. My concern is that it may end up sounding unnatural. But that's one of my personal challenges for this story.
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
- Hi there Sas,
I loved it. It really had me on the edge of my seat. Poor Mikey. I'm dying to see what happens next.
Author's responseThanks!! :D So glad you're still enjoying it! I've started off aiming for creepy and disturbing but if I get it right it won't be long before it gets scary.
Thanks for reviewing, as ever! It keeps me going! I know all the advice everyone gives (including me!) is is that writing is supposed to be for the author first and reader second, but who doesn't get a kick out of good reviews? :D
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