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• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) kelly-khaos 2009-06-02

  Another great chapter!
  
  Gerard's still having mood swings. The things he was doing at lunch were so rude.I think he kinda deserved that condom comment from Willow, but I still feel bad for him.
  
  Anyway, update soon!
  
  -Kelly

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review, Kelly. Yeah, Gerard is dealing with a lot of emotions, he's fighting his emotions.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) somethingorother 2009-06-02

  Are you sure Gerard isn't really a girl and has PMS like 24/7? Geez, what is wrong with him. He is so rude.
  
  I was almost hoping Gerard would be nice and give some money to Willow or secretly to Alicia for Willow and be nice...but then lunch happened. What a poo head.
  
  OooOOoo pained look? Will he stop being an ass?
  
  Update soon!

  Author's response

  Hey thanks for the review. Glad you caught the "pained" look.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) canustakemyheart 2009-06-03

  Actually, I think your Gerard is in character for someone who had lived through the scenario of his back story. Especially the fact that he just goes and fucks random women and "it means nothing". That would be like taking out frustration or something I would imagine. Great comment from Willow though. They're both getting to know how to get to one another in multiple ways. I see him also openly being rude during that whole diner thing (and after the Mikey chat) possibly in an attempt to get her not to like him in that way but also I think he's in denial. He's started to get feelings for her but doesn't want to get hurt.
  
  And of course you've set it up that Willow is actually the same type of character - hurt badly by love. And she's also started to get feelings for him and doesn't want to get hurt. Wait till he finds out she's a virgin ... doubtful he could resist that.

  Author's response

  Wow you just nailed exactly what's going on with these characters. They both are having problems dealing with their feelings towards each other. The virgin thing....yeah well that will be addressed later, of course. Thanks for the review.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-06-03

  haha! i totally agree with canustakemyheart!
  
  i loved this chapter! i love how you write! i love you!
  
  was that taking it too far?
  
  nope i don't thinks so!
  
  thank you.

  Author's response

  Well thanks, I love you too!!! Glad you are enjoying this story.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) pelican_dance 2009-06-03

  Awesome chapter. Amazing story. Love it, love you for writing it, please update soon!

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. I'm really so happy to hear that people are enjoying this. More soon.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) olinda_13 2009-06-03

  interesting i like it i dunno i have mixed feeling with gerard in this one and the lil comment willow made at the end seem to hurt him alot and i think its cos of his exwife and such

  Author's response

  Yeah, Willow's comment did hurt him but too bad she didn't see. Thanks for reviewing.

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) xelcius2518 2009-06-03

  gosh! you need to update soon! i'm waiting for it really! i'm a fan... i like every bit of it!

  Author's response

  Thanks so very, very much for reviewing. Comments like this just make my day!

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2009-06-03

  this is getting interesting.....

  Author's response

  I'm glad you think it's getting interesting. Just wait!

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) theunspokentruth 2009-06-03

  gah. This made my day. I have been waiting for you to update since forever. |; Ha.
  
  That was really good, I kinda felt sorry for Gerard and all but he deserved it.
  Willow a virgin, that was unexpected. :)
  And ... Yeah.
  Gerard still has his mood swings. He's such a poo head.
  Trying to deny liking her.
  Grr.
  Well anyway I have wasted the valuable time of everyone who has just read this! Wooo.
  
  xoxo Jade

  Author's response

  Hey thanks for the review, Jade. I enjoyed reading your thoughts and calling Gee a Poo Head made me laugh!

• So Shut Your Eyes

  (#) TheSnoo 2009-06-03

  wow i think Gerard really likes Willow. Well they will both give up because they'll be tired of avoiding their emotions. I'm really sad for Willow. I've always though that if i could read people's minds it would b so awesome. But Willow is so alone and she can't even fall in love freely.. well she won't be alone from now on...Guess, I'll have to wait for the next update..!:)

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. I'm glad you understand how much both of the characters are dealing with.

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