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Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors
4 reviewsAU: 5yr. Voldemort awakes the 6 Dark Emperors, proclaiming himself the 7th. However, the First wants nothing to do with them. He searches for redemption, finding Harry and offering his teaching and...
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Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors
(#) NacNud 2009-06-05
Interesting start. I look forward to see what you do with the story.
Keep up the good work.Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors
(#) Under_score 2009-06-05
Interesting premise but its already falling into the well worn cliche of mentoring Harry.
Also somehow I don't see Voldemort being frightened of anything other than death, even a Super powered OC. Maybe if you had the Super powered OC out to kill Harry, I would continue to read it.Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors
(#) shaman_king 2009-06-15
Good story. I'm starting to think someone's got a personal thing against you, all your stories are poorly rated, undeservingly I might add.Harry Potter and the Seven Dark Emperors
(#) i_king 2009-07-04
Plot sounds different and, though the start is good, the chapter lacked a certain connection to the characters.
It would have been easier if you had just given some history about the character than just start off with a dialogue with serenity whereby you make the user patch in bits and pieces of the information. keeps the mind ticking but not sure if it would keep the reader interested :)
Carry on
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