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Mamma Mia! The My Chemical Romance Story
(#) molliegym 2009-06-07
Well, this story is certainly... interesting. I think the idea of a My Chemical Romance version of Mamma Mia! is hilarious. Some of the chapters are kind of hard to read, and there are some mistakes in grammar/punctuation; like, when there's dialogue, each time a new person speaks, it should be a new paragraph. Overall, I think the concept of the story is pretty good, but it's not carried out very well. It could potentially be a great story, but it needs "work".Author's response
I did the mistakes on purpose. I'm the druggie, havent you read my other stories? but thanks anyway bitch.
P.S You fat.Mamma Mia! The My Chemical Romance Story
(#) leeshdiddy22 2009-06-07
That wasn't very nice.Author's response
I know. I'm a bitch because they took my catnip away. now I cant smoke it so deal with it, bitch.
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