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What I'll do to make things right
3 reviewshe lets out the things inside him and he reveals his last days...
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Shock
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-06-09
Awk, poor Shock.
He's not going to die is he?!
I don't want him to die.
Fin Ox.Shock
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-09
I can totally see where Shock is coming from..with the whole "gain nothing, lose nothing"
Although..to me he sounds really super anti-social. But that's just me. And it must be pretty sad being all alone, and knowing you're only there for one purpose: saving people. Or something like that.
You know, for a young kid, you're a pretty good writer. I don't think I wrote that good when I was your age. Man that makes me feel old! I'm only 16..er, almost. Anyway, you should read some of my stories. I use profanity in a few of them, but nothing too bad.
REVENGEShock
(#) Death_Note 2009-06-10
I cannot believe you are only 12! Smart arsed story this is! Update soon, poor kid. Nice though, very brave!
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