Sirius and Co. realise their mistake, but its all too late
I cant wait to see weree you take this. I have to ask though is this going to be a long story or a short one ? keep up the good work
(#) kimr 2009-06-22
Eh?? Harry is dead, now what? The last two chapters have given a sense of finality to this story, should it not say complete, as there doesn't appear to be anything further to say or do. I think you needed to flesh out the chapters a bit more, to show that there might be hope on the horizon or some such thing.
So is there any more? Do we see everyone's reactions and Harry in Heaven with his parents, and Voldemort taking over? Or does Harry come back?
Leaving aside the occasionally dodgy English this story just feels too rushed.
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