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• You Don't Care.

  (#) figilio_vampiri 2009-06-21

  Okay, normally I avoid these types of stories like the plague, because...normally, they're pretty bad, cheesy, OTT. I didn't like that you took what could have been an entirely different ORIGINAL piece and made it Frank's POV, but that's personal choice. So, I didn't love it or LIKE LIKE LIKE it, but the slight rhythm gives it charm. And I can see the potential, very much so.

  Author's response

  Well everyone has their opinions..Thank you reviewing still.

• You Don't Care.

  (#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-06-22

  Really cause i LOVED this!!!! Haha sorry i was just reading the other persons review. I liked the rhythm i think it added a lot to it. The story was so sad too, poor Frankie. Well i enjoyed it, i think your a very good writer!

  Author's response

  Aww thank you. Yeah I thought this was pretty much garbage, but thank you so much for reviewing (: I appreciate that very much (:
  
  
  -Lynai.

• You Don't Care.

  (#) mysilentromance 2009-06-22

  I loved how it was a poem instead of a story. The rhythm was very good and it helped make the piece even more enjoyable. Very well done and I hope to read more from you.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
  
  As for the poem, it wasn't my intention for it to come out that way, but I guess it just happened (:
  
  
  Thank you again! (:

• You Don't Care.

  (#) KattyKat23 2009-06-22

  wow that's... wow

  Author's response

  Is that good wow or a bad wow? (:

• You Don't Care.

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-08-13

  I'd say it's in the middle wow LoL
  
  Good wow because it's unique, and I don't remember reading a poem in Frank's pov :)
  
  Bad wow because suicide and Frank killing himself is just so cliche' :) And yesh, I realize this is old.. LoL
  
  Anyway!
  I make WAY TOO MANY FACES!
  But I make faces when I'm irritated..and I'm irritated right now because my fic isn't being rated...:( Oh well. Whatever, girlfriend! Ha ha...yeah, I'ma shut up XD
  
  Revenge

  Author's response

  Yeah I thought about that, it did seem pretty cliche, I should've switched roles, but I just thought it was better this way.
  
  For some reason I like writing oneshots better....I dunno why, maybe because I'm better at it lol.

• You Don't Care.

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-02

  One shots are, in some ways, easier to write :)

• You Don't Care.

  (#) kjvonblood 2009-11-14

  wow! that was so touching. i faved it :)
  
  Kj x

  Author's response

  Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
  
  xoxo

• You Don't Care.

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-29

  I remember reading this! Ha ha it's still kind of sad.. and cliche'.. LoL
  
  SUICIDE!
  That's at the end of a Minless Self Indulgence song.. I think it's called Whack.. xD
  
  Luff you!

• You Don't Care.

  (#) Leah270193 2009-12-04

  woah that was powerful stuff, I loved it! It was so sad and so poignant i'm adding it to my favourites nowww... :)

  Author's response

  Thank you. That means alot. Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
  
  xoxo

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