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Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side
(#) ohhai 2009-06-29
WOOOO MY POV.
shit be going down in the next chappy, i can feel it. can't wait!
awesome job girlie :D
Author's response
Thank yooouuu! :DChicago, the fang-like thorn in my side
(#) MyChemicalFangirl 2009-06-30
Suspeeeeense! XD
Looove the story still. :D
Oh, and if that's Victoria from Cobra, then I've always wanted to hit her for some reason. ;P
Thankyou for including me, again, I'll try and keep up with this!
Sorry for takeing so long to actually get to reading this though,
I have another 5 stories going right now, and lots of homework, and school.XD
I would say one thing, mabye try splitting the paragraphs up a bit more?
It's just haveing it all in bulks confuses my fragily stupid mind a little. XD
Thankss!
Christie,xo
Love you!
Cannot wait for the update. ':DAuthor's response
Hey no worries! I'm gonna take the paragraph thing on.Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side
(#) ixamxnotxaxnugget 2009-06-30
How have I not reviewed this yet?! D:
Dayyum. Scadnals between Brooke and Pete? AND lies. Ohhhh shiit. ;D
AND WHERE IS GABE?! Did he just run off to get Bill or was it William in his body?! I'll never know until the next update... ;_;
Ahaha I loved the whole 'Well I did this badass thing' competition between everyone. Blasting holes in walls is far more badass than Pete shoving Bdon through a wall. Sorry Pete. Harper wins. ;)
Ahh.
Loved it.
I gotta know what happens next.
-Natalie
ps- My new chappy will be up this week. Though it won't be a lengthy one. Its all good. No worries. :)Author's response
Oooh where is Gabe? Thanks.Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side
(#) xPrettyInPunkx 2009-06-30
Great as always. I love reading this, it's different than most FOB vampire stories. I wonder how their going to explain whats going on. Excited for more! =)Author's response
Thank you thank you :)Chicago, the fang-like thorn in my side
(#) MyChemicalFangirl 2009-06-30
Hehe no problem.
And it was just a suggestion. (:
I looove youu! (:
Christie,xoChicago, the fang-like thorn in my side
(#) let_it_go 2009-07-01
fantastic, as per usual.
Author's response
Shortest review everrr! But thanks :D
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