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On why it is never a good idea to pick on the guy with the castle in his head.
27 reviewsMeeting the Head of House, meeting a potions master, a trip to the Hospital win and meeting’s with the headmaster
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Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) vettesr 2009-07-18
I really have enjoyed your story. It almost seems like what a continuation of Hogwart's Child would have been. When you are writing however, it would make it easier to read if you would put an empty line inbetween two different people speaking. It is harder to follow having two and three people speaking in the same paragraph. Thank you for sharing your storyHarry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) frozendream 2009-07-29
I just thought that I would let you know that I am enjoying this story Thank youHarry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) Qellar 2011-03-11
Saw this story being posted, very good story, but did noticed the year posted so guess it has been abandon as the near 90% of the stories here on Ficwad have been abandon.
As for Snape, I say he should suffer and lose his magic and become a squib.
The castle should appear before dumbles in the great hall, accuse him of being a dark lord and strip him of his magic making him a squib and removing him as headmaster....Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) timm1131 2011-03-13
Good story!!As this is a fan fic,don't let the negative nit-pickers get to you.It's the story itself that is important,not little details.That's my feeling anyway, and I look forward to the rest of this enjoyable tale.Thanks for sharing, and I hope you have as much fun writing this as I am reading it.Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) rickoshay 2011-03-13
I can see that you haven't updated in while.So if you are testing the water I hope you will continue. A little snape bashing is also good thaing , and mabe a slap or two on DumblesHarry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) GrantLarceny 2011-04-08
dont fire snape!!! if you fire snape harry cant torment him any more...lol good chapter!Harry Potter and the fledgling phoenix
(#) kelwin 2011-04-27
This is great. I really like the way hogwards is in his mind helping him. Yes Snape would not normally cast a spell like that but Snape does have a bad temper and sometimes lets it rule him like in the fifth book when he through Harry and then through a jar at him. Good work can't waite for more.
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