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Fathers and Sons
2 reviewsHe understands what took his parents their whole lives to figure out; hate really is just another kind of love. But what he's got to learn, is that fathers and sons are not so different, no matter ...
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Fathers and Sons
(#) lincolnderek 2009-07-22
Words can't describe the way I love the world of Dragon Ball. When I read this story, I saw how much of a pathetic fan the author truly is. To miss spell the word of the Saiyans is just utter stupidity.
But the part I disliked the most, was your imagination. You had no imagination, what so ever. Use your own work of the world of DB. I have done so as well. In my own version of DBAF, I have used new characters, new story lines, and new meanings of what Goku can do. Try to make your own story, by just adding in the characters, and this story will be greatly written. Until then, please stop.Author's response
You're right, I don't spell Sayajin correctly - in Japanese, it should be "Saya-jin" instead. Saiyans is an American bastardization, not even worth watching.Fathers and Sons
(#) lincolnderek 2009-07-22
This story will never amount to anything. Try another hobby, before you hurt yourself.
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