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Harry is offered a choice. He also is offered some assistance.
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Fire Down Under
(#) grookill 2009-07-23
A better sense of direction than the first two chapters. Actually, the first two should have been chapter 1, and this should have been chapter 2.
I like the way you used Fate in this and I'm hoping you'll find a way to keep the Fate/Harry interaction going on for a few more chapters.
Good luck with chapter 4!Author's response
I generally break chapters up by scene for the most part. For that matter, originally, I had no plans to do anything like Ch2, it was either going to be the first or third option. Then I decided to have some fun with this. I generally write fairly bizarre stories in all honesty. I like taking a little piece of canon or fanon and stretching it like taffy.
Fate will probably stick around, right now I am debating sticking her into either ch 4 or a later chapter.Fire Down Under
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2009-07-25
Very amusing, I must say. I hope you decide to lengthen the chapters into at least two scenes. Your individuals are fairly long, but nowhere near chapter length.
Looking forward to more.Author's response
I tend to write in bursts or as I get the time. I have some other fics that are longer chapter wise, but I haven't really started posting them yet. Honestly, I have been having too much fun with the ones I have been posting here. I am working on another ch for The Rest of the Story as I type.Fire Down Under
(#) TurtleBlue 2009-10-04
I donnno...Harry is still in the dumpster pad getting crapped on by everyone in the building...it's Oct now and no update to his "hopefore" salvation in chappy 4. Guess Fate is still po'ed from not getting a taste of that Potter Stonker. So had to rate this a minus 1 since I can't stand a road-killed Harry not getting his due, or are you really giving him his due?Author's response
I wouldn't want to ruin the story. I am actually trying to finalize the plot lines. There will be a ton of twists, and for it not to be a steaming wreck, I have to have the whole story plotted out. Plus, I have been getting swarmed by rabid, crack addled plot bunnies.
Trust me Harry will end up happy.
But bear in mind, where most say, Don't get mad, get even...
I am a big believer in -
Don't get mad, destroy everything that ever mattered to them.Fire Down Under
(#) tharzzzdunn1 2009-11-06
Nah, I'm sorry it should pretty much go along the lines of: Elder Wand, Cloak of Invisibility, Ring of Resurrection. Rocks fall, everyone dies! Fate too, sodding bint!Fire Down Under
(#) cephis 2010-01-29
It seems that this story got lost somewhere. It is an interesting twist thoughAuthor's response
It is still being worked on, just it has grown a bit. Originally it was just going to be a spin on the Harem thing. Then I felt sorry for Harry.
Then I decided to go for Revenge!Harry.
Problem is if I go the way my instincts say, I will piss of a lot of people. But it is fairly crucial to the story, and gives it the fire it needs.
Then the ADD kicked in, and I started writing like eight other stories.
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