Harry explains his return.
(#) Treck 2009-07-25
Other then the fact that it needs a beta and longer chapters I liked it.
its still a good as I think it started but I do agree that it could use a beta for example the leter to hermoin just cuts off
I hate it. This is total and utter crap! You really need a beta. Also you the idea its self sucks. Harry got all of Merlin's Knowledge and King Arther's Power in less then four day wow! My advice scrap it and start again.
Great work mate and like Treck said apart for the need of a beta reader, this is a great story and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
PLEASE update soon.
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