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Black, Gray and White
(#) David3560 2009-08-02
I guess my spell is working but you still need more so more story O if I could I would of rated this story at least in the 100s its GREAT. More we need more.Black, Gray and White
(#) Apate 2009-08-03
I love this story, I'd love to see the look on Ron Ginny and Albuses faces...it would be priceless....I can't wait for the next chapter.Black, Gray and White
(#) menci 2009-08-08
Good Work on the Theatrics in this chapter.
I liked it very much and waiting to see more of the re-entrance of Harry in Hogwarts.
Keep up the Good Work and Update soon please.
I would rate it good but its not open now for rating +3.Black, Gray and White
(#) iiMagical 2009-08-10
I like it. ^-^ You really need to write more. x3 I love the enternce in hogwarts. I can't wait till the next chapter.Black, Gray and White
(#) issabissa 2009-08-11
A great chapter! I can't wait to see how everyone reacts to the announcement! Keep up the great work!Black, Gray and White
(#) azphxbrd 2009-09-01
I have just finished reading all 14 posted chapters.I like this story very much.
I enjoyed the battles against the DE's resulting thier deaths instead of being thrown into jail.
Too bad Siruis was killed but Narcrissa back in the family again is good.
I wonder what Ron's face looked like when Harry announce he was the DADA professer.
Keep up the good work.Black, Gray and White
(#) sherzar 2009-10-08
The story's pretty cool.Although I've to say the last part of your chapter was disappointing.You just made Tonks and Fleur look like total sluts.They are Harry's girlfriends but that bit exceeded the limit in ridiculousness.That catwalk part was unnecessary and Harry's entrance was over dramatic.But your Sirus scene was hilarious and Nariccisa's story is really heartbreaking.And that's the only reason I'd give this story a 4.5 star rating out of 5.Black, Gray and White
(#) ToastyLoasty 2009-11-09
Hey, you haven't updated in a while. Please update!
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