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Why Doesn't Anyone Ever Notice Her?
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-07-30
James Bond-y.. LUFF it :) And the guys eaves dropping? Yeah, I can totally see Ray being the one on bottom..of course, Bob would probably be on bottom if it were reversed, ya know? Okay, NOW I'm just plain rambling but whatever blah blah blah
Had to say something :)
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(#) Moonshyne 2009-07-30
Hi there,
I really like the story so far. I love Bob stories!!
You're doing fine with the language it's definitely hard learning american slang and spelling of things.
Looking forward to more.Why Doesn't Anyone Ever Notice Her?
(#) sickly_ill 2009-07-30
poor Bob. it's true! there isn't enough stories about Bob! this should be a crime! anyway, i like this story. =] i can't wait for more! maybe she'll end up liking him. who knows?! shrugs
XOXOX ANDREA =}Why Doesn't Anyone Ever Notice Her?
(#) IeroMyHeroMCR 2009-07-30
It's not getting worse this is really good :) I'm american and still like using european cuss words in my fics sometimes... arse and shite are fun to say haha!!!Why Doesn't Anyone Ever Notice Her?
(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-07-31
It's not getting worse.
I like it, and yeah picking up on American slang can sorta be hard.
F xoxo.Why Doesn't Anyone Ever Notice Her?
(#) MyChemicalFangirl 2009-08-31
Alright!
New day!
Still late,
But on Laptop!
Yipee! XD
Ahaha I love where this is going.
Sorry I didn't read more last night,
Lost connection.
Christie,xo
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