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Chapter Five
7 reviews"Giant talking teddy bear!" I squealed, eyes widening and running towards Brendon, nearly knocking him over as our bodies collided. "Do you grant wishes?"
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Take It A Day At A Time
(#) CHELSEAsmile 2009-08-02
This story is absolutely amazing!
The beginning was hilarious. I love The Wizard Of Oz! :D
But once I got to the present day, I shed a couple of tears.
It's so sad! :'(
I don't want Brendon to die! I want him to wake up while Ryan is sitting there signing the papers and then he'd get better and they'd move in together and live happily ever after!
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But I'm done rambling now.
Please update soon! :)
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(#) lyrical_lies 2009-08-02
i love the trip it was fucking hilarious but i dont want bren to die! i swear running makeup is never good! make something magical happen and brendon wakes up...or show improvment so ryan changes him mind!! PLEASE!
ill stop yelling at you now....
anyway cant wait for the next chappy
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(#) xxMCRMYxx 2009-08-03
STOP MAKING ME FUCKIN CRY
Oh well I do enjoy a story where I get to cry =D
Well done, this is SO good!!
Please update soon!!
xx TildeTake It A Day At A Time
(#) bloodstainedbest 2009-08-03
AHHHHH FUCK! Don't take Brenny-Bear off the life support! Gah! CRY CRY CRY!
The beginning was so freakin hysterical though!I was laughing my ass off! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!! I shall stare at the screen until a new chapter comes up. Or just use my time machine! WOOHOO!Take It A Day At A Time
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-08-05
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Don't unplug him!Take It A Day At A Time
(#) comradskyl 2009-10-27
D:
Honestly, this is one of the best stories I've read in any sort of category or genre or anything. And believe me when I say I've read hundreds of stories. Literally, and anything from anime to Harry Potter. But yours will forever stick in my mind as one of the most well written and interesting and bloody SAD stories I could ever have read.
You have done such a wonderful job. Honestly, I really enjoyed the flashbacks because it was a great way for us to see how characters developed and led a sense of impending doom to the whole thing. I was still fighting tooth and nail hoping Ryan wouldn't sign the papers.
And so that brings me to wonder if this is completely over? I just feel that there are some loose ends still needing to be tied up. It didn't quite seem over. So I hope you will give us one more chapter, no matter what you decide to do, because I need some more closure!
Not that I'd hate you or anything if Brendon somehow managed to pull through. Sigh.
Really, this is one of the best stories ever. I love it.Take It A Day At A Time
(#) GracieOnyx 2011-04-05
Oh my goodness! A job well done if I may say so. That was amazing. And though I'm sad that Brendon died, that was sort of what made the story so good and well-written. Bravo! Totally one of the best that I have ever come across in the numerous stories that I've read.
Maddie
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