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007: Muddles, the Toddler Club
1 reviewThe friends go to a club together, but they're not all 21. So they have to make it an 18 and over club...
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One Messed Up Love Story
(#) hey_nena 2009-11-01
You have a great pace going. I love the flow and ease of the characters. I hope you continue this story. I really enjoyed what I just read.
Roxy's job is a little unrealistic but hey, it's fanfic right? I wanna know what happens with Benji and how MCR fit into the storyline.Author's response
Thaaaanks! I appreciate this nice review.
And it certainly is only fanfiction. Thanks for being cool about that. Get ready though, for it's about to get even more unrealistic. I can't remember if the jet has been introduced in any of these chapters I've got up here...readers have been known to get super frustrated about the jet. It's pretty much the most unrealistic thing ever.
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