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A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) Moonshyne 2009-08-20
Hi there Sas,
That was sad all the way around. I love how Pete turned Patrick because it wasn't the usual bite to the neck. I forgot that Patrick would be drinking his own blood so that was sad and poignant.
Poor Joe not being able to off and save Andrea, but I'm glad he stayed because in the end Andy really needed him.
It made sense that after turning Patrick, Pete would be hungry again. Like I said not a huge vampire story fan (only because right now it so cliche) but I really love this one.
Great job Sas and looking forward to reading more.Author's response
Yeah, it's been a funny old chapter. Poor Joe, all he wants to do is save the woman that he's grown to care for (and she for him) but she's under William's control now and he's very strong.
Again though, poor Joe - with Andy unconscious and 2 vampires to deal with, Joe's got his hands full.
What can he do? How will Patrick wake? How will Pete wake? For that matter, how will Andy wake? Sore, probably! ;)
More soon!
Thanks so much for the review! I will get back to the MCR fics, but I felt like I needed a complete change. I really started to feel like my writing was getting stale and maybe even predictable. I'm not fishing for compliments here - don't worry, but I do think that when I go back to them, I'll be a lot fresher.
Thanks again!!
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(#) charliexbrown 2009-08-21
Yeah! Good job Andy, on getting Joe to stay away from the newly-evil Andrea! I think she and Beckett will make a good pair actually, hahaha.
And good job Pete on going through with turning Patrick!... even though he may be evil and Pete's hungry again... but oh well :D
Can't wait to see what happens when he wakes up... Update soooooon! (please :D)Author's response
Yes, I think Joe actually had a lucky escape there!
The waking up scenes - lol! Even I don't know how that will go, but poor Joe has to deal with it alone. There's no way Andy could possibly wake before Pete or Patrick. The fact that Pete had his hand over his mouth at the time the taser was used would have transferred some of the energy down to Andy and the specially modified tasers are designed to deal with older and stronger vampires than even Pete (all of about 18 to 20 months, I'd say). Joes probably got a good couple of hours before they wake.
Thanks, as ever, for reviewing!! I really appreciate it! SO glad you're enjoying it!
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(#) Rainbow_CupcakesXD 2009-10-21
Poor Andy!
Poor Fire Crotch...
tsk tsk tsk..
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