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A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) ficfriction 2009-08-26
NEED MORE! Holy effin hell I loved it! Seriously, I did not see that one coming, I was expecting him to come back to the compound or whatever and explain he needed alone time... and feeding from beckett? .... O.O... seriously, damn... Anyway, what I wanted to come over here for to begin with... Yes, Call It Karma is in a series lol. It starts with I'm In Love With My Own Sins, then goes on to Snapped, then on to Just Another Halleluja, then the final, which is the end but a sequel to I'm In Love... is Call It Karma. But no more FOB death and you need to post more! lol I love this fic, seriously.Author's response
Thanks!! :D
Yeah, I was thinking about it yesterday because I thought I should work out the plot for the next few chapters and I thought to myself, ok, he's been there three months, what did he eat??? And of course the answer and the rest of the plot flooded in and, well, yes, interesting times ahead!
Will check your stories out too :D
More soon!
Sas x
ps - if you want to read some of my other stuff, I write on the MCR section as Sassy. Here's a list: http://www.ficwad.com/author/67979A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) charliexbrown 2009-08-26
NO PETE! NOOOOOOOO! Why would he do that? Is it anything to do with having human blood?? Unless it's a trick... and he's up to something... AGH!!!!!
And Andrea... Yes, William may be incredibly gorgeous and make everyone love him... but don't fall for it!!
Honestly, every time I see the story having a happy ending something like this happens! I'll have eaten my fingers by the end of the story...
Looking forward to the next chapter oh so much. :DAuthor's response
The ending, happy or otherwise, is a little way off yet.
Yes, what is Pete doing at Beckett's mansion? I guess we'll just have to wait to find out ;)
Andrea - give her her due, she might be under Beckett's control but already her mind is starting to pick holes in her logic. Maybe there's hope yet?
Thanks for reviewing and please keep your fingers intact enough to review!! :D
Sas x
ps - and you'll need them for an update of yours too!! :D (hint hint!!)A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) nadialexandra 2009-08-26
2:18 am- and I'm reading this. I've been an insomniac since I was six and never have I loved it as much as I do now. Why? Because I got to read this, ftw... now that I'm finally away from the Cobra Crew.
Teh UK, hmm? Coolbeans. So you're, like, seven hours ahead of me. o: So right now it's around 9:30am over there and you're probably sippin' coffee and doing... whatever it is you guys do over there at that time; while I'm trying to get myself to sleep. -_- Wow.
Now, Patrick's restrained (-frames mental image-) and can't do much at the moment. Okay. Cool. Let's forget about him for a second. (-gasp-) [Bytheway... have you guys seen his mug shot? I'm serious- he's still sexy there.]
Next. Ryannnn. George Ryan Ross. Now, tell me Sas, can sexy vampires do cocaine? 'cause Beckett might need to get some. (Ooh. Zing. Damn. Couldn't help it, there...)
Uhm... NOW FOR AN ACTUAL RELEVANT REVIEW! YAYYYY.
One— I'm tired. HOW DO I GO TO SLEEP?!
Two— Petahh? At Will's masionnn? o: I smell a scandal.
Three— So now that Pete's (presumably) back, Brendon's pretty much out of the picture until he gets a new plan, Andrea's under Beckett's sexy-loveable-awesomeness-candy-loving-adorableness-but-with-fangs...ness Spell, Patrick's chained to his bed (still loving that image), Joe and Andy need to work on shit involving dealing with Patrick, Spencer's finally got the spot he wanted but now has Pete to compete with and Beckett's just... sexy... what happens? Does Pete stay; or trick them? Does Bilvy give Spencer the boot and make Pete his new second? Does Bilvy pose for a picture with candy in his hand and all over the floor after having a party for Pete's return? Do these ants finally leave me the fuck alone and go bite someone else? Do I get a life? Does Andrea figure it all out? Does Patrick flip the fuck out when he wakes up? Does Joe ever get some sleep? Does Andy find the Holy Water and/or Priest? Will these questions never end? Will Bilvy go find HeyChris and take sexy pictures with him to make Pete angry? Will Brendon come up with a plot? Will Ryan get his cocaine? Will Bedussey and his evil twin sell the cocaine to Ryan? Will Bedussey 2 ever come out? Will Pancho live? Will I ever get to sleep and stop this? And, most importantly, WHEN WILL YOU MAKE A GODDAMN FUCKING UPDATE 'CAUSE I'M GONNA EXPLODE?!
....teehee.Author's response
Oh dear! I hope you got some sleep in the end, you sound, well, stressed and a teensy bit hyper!
Ok, so in order:
1: I should try lying down if I were you and think about Patrick (I hope he's ok - in real life, that is)
2: Yes, Pete's (wish I could stop typing pate instead of Pete, that's going to happen in a post and I won't notice, you know) back at William's place. Wonder why? I don't think that William wants him for a Second, after all he did say he was going to hand him over to the other coven leaders to 'play with'. Spencer should be worried though, but I'm not saying why... ;)
3. Yup, Beckett wants to keep Andrea, but already she's questionning (and admittedly ignoring) what's happening to her.
Patrick's still chained to the bed and I see you approve! Perhaps you could pretend he's chained to your bed, but I doubt that would help you sleep more!
Oh, yeah and Ryan - I wasn't originally going to put his name in, I had the description there and no name. Then I thought about how annoying it would be to keep referring to him as 'the one Spencer turned' so I figured, why not? Everybody else is in it!! Lol!
I have started the next chapter and I've also written what I thought would be the last chapter, but turns out it may not be. Who knows? Not me, that's for sure!
Thanks for reviewing and I hope you're not awake to read this still. Btw - are you sure about the time difference? it's only 8.30 here.
Sas x
Yeah I've had 2 coffees and a bacon sandwich! :D
oh and I had the day off work yesterday and bought two new hats! I've got like 20 but you can never have too many hats or bags (purses)!
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(#) Moonshyne 2009-08-27
Hi there Sas,
At least they have one vampire controlled (for now).
That totally made sense that Pete would feed off of Beckett, that's why he's stronger then the rest more like an elder vampire instead of a newly turned one.
I like the whole theory behind why Pete and hopefully Patrick don't fall for the the tricks such as mind control.
Speaking of, poor Andrea she is so clueless and thinking she's in love with Beckett. But hopefully she'll figure it all out.
I'm not as shocked as everyone else that Pete ended up there, the question definitely is why. For the greater good or to join his "master"?
Looking forward to more when you get a chance cause I'm dying to find out what happens next.
Author's response
Heya!
Andrea's strong and quite independent - she took no messing from Joe, although there may well have been an ulterior motive for wanting to stay with him ;)
Thing is, Beckett's mind control techniques are pretty powerful, but despite that she is questioning her situation. Whether or not she can break free of him remains to be seen.
There are some clues dotted about as to why Pete's returned to Beckett. More might turn up soon, but yes, the big question is, as you say, - is it a trick or has he really gone back to join his master?
Thanks for reviewing!! The next chapter's on the go!
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(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-21
Darn.. you just HAD to do that to me, didn't you! Grrr
LoL
:)
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