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Chapter 20
6 reviewsPatrick gives Joe and Andy an unexpected ultimatum and Pete learns of Beckett's plans and gets some much needed revenge
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A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) Moonshyne 2009-09-05
Hi there Sas,
I read this last night but was too tired to review properly.
It must be shocking to Joe and Andy how passe Patrick is about all this. But he knows it was for the greater good it was the only way he would survive and the only way he could still help Pete while Joe and Andy are still very distrustful. Powerful stuff by Patrick but I get what he's saying. Who the hell wants to live like that. Keep feeding him his "chicken" and hopefully that will be alright.
I'm glad Pete seems to be himself more so I think we know what side he's on. But what will happen when yet again he's forced to feed on Andrea. Yikes.
I love that he told on Spencer and was more than willing to drain him. I love the last line, I can see Pete smiling as he says it.
Great job as usual, I'll definitely try and be more on top of things!!
Author's response
I've actually got the next chapter half/mostly written, so should go up in the next day or two.
So glad you enjoyed it.
Yeah, I'm glad Spencer got his come-uppance as well (do you have that phrase over there?). He deserved it!
Oh, he's definitely smiling at that last line!
Thanks for reviewing! It really does mean a lot to me!
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(#) ficfriction 2009-09-05
Oh heart... Heart indeed! =) You just kind of popped out of nowhere as with how often I get on this site, and I'm glad I found your stories because I'm seriously hooked =) Keep up the good work, and I agree with the person above, I'm glad he ratted out Spencer as well =)Author's response
Wow!! I'm so flattered!! Thank you!!
I'm not entirely out of nowhere. I write on the MCR category as Sassy, but I made a new account for over here. Don't ask - it made sense at the time! Lol!!
So glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
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(#) LyssaLa 2009-09-08
wow defiantly awesome, i was up till midnight desperately trying to finish the entire story, can't wait for the next chapter!Author's response
Wow!! Thanks!!
I thought I had the next chapter nearly sorted, but then realised I need something before it, so am going to start again, but I do still have a chapter for later!
Thanks again!!
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(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-09-11
finnally got the chance to read it. Marvelous! I can't wait for the next oneAuthor's response
Heya!! Glad you enjoyed it!! You flatterer you! The next one is ready and waiting!
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(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-21
I knew it was a trick!
But.. then again.. if it isn't (and I'm sure it's already been said and done by the time you see this LoL)A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-21
Er.. sorry, got distracted and hit the Submit button LoL
I was gonna say: If it isn't, Pete'll probably get killed off anyway XD
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