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Things are starting to turn quite sour. And Pete's starting to feel it...
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Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) Warpedchris 2009-09-05
That was intense!I hope Patrick and Pete make up soon.Please update soon!?Author's response
I'm not gonna say anything on the making-up front... :D Aren't I nasty??Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-05
Oh dear! Looks like Patrick's dream was right. Definitely a storm brewing and maybe the more pleasant of the two paths was not the right one to take?
But then, he's not responsible for old moody-pants refusing to talk to him. How quick he forgets who it was that arranged for them to be there in the first place!
And I'm still very curious as to why the secrecy with him and William. Is there significance in what they're up to?
Great chapter! Worth the wait!! But still want another update :D
Sas xAuthor's response
Is there secrecy? Haha, I seriously didn't intend it that way. There's nothing in it really. But maybe Pete's feeling the secrecy, being so left out of things...
He's mostly moody about Patrick not being there to talk to about the Ashlee episode. Things should be clarified more in the next chapter. But you might have to wait a bit before it's up, it's back to college on Monday and it's a busy busy year... :( So there may be a delay. I'll try and make it worth the wait again haha.Fall Out Boy Trail
(#) areyounormal 2009-09-05
Well, if there's no secrecy then you've achieved the ultimate goal of making the reader see things through a character's eyes! I kept thinking - what're they up to?? Is he really just producing and helping them out... hmm!
Oh, I know what's bothering him, but he really needs to think it through. How could Patrick possibly know it would all go horribly wrong? If he knew that, he would never have invited them in the first place!
Poor Pete though. He's so upset, he's just lashing out. And you always lash out at the person you know will forgive you. He wants to be careful though - Patrick's been forgiving enough for one lifetime.
I will cheerfully wait however long it takes for the next chapter, because I know it'll be worth the wait!
Sas x
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