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Chapter 5 – His Will Alone
14 reviewsLily returns with Nev and Bella... A Daughter of the Black House is reclaimed
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(#) hammerhead 2009-09-16
This chapter kicks ass man. I am now patiently awaiting the next few so we can see what happens to Lucy, Dumblenutts, and the rest of the poor excuses for human beings much less magical humans.immortal Fangs
(#) keichan2 2009-09-23
Thanks for the new chapter!
I have to say that I thought that Nymphadora would have tasted Harry's blood, when she got to him. The "Come color Harry!" surprised me!
On that subject, I wonder if you intend to have any (all?) of the girls changed at one time or the other, be it accidentally (Harry's instincts, or real accidental ingestion of is blood) or voluntarily (when of age, said girl asks him to do it)
I wonder if you will have them saving Narcissa, and what you intend for Draco.
Please, update soon!immortal Fangs
(#) sidiousclone 2009-12-06
great twist with bellatrix ive alwys enjoyed the potter/longbottom alliance too and the story is getting better and better awaiting more with anticipation
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