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Chapter 5 – His Will Alone
14 reviewsLily returns with Nev and Bella... A Daughter of the Black House is reclaimed
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(#) taintedloki 2009-09-13
This story continues to be interesting. I will be awaiting the next chapter and more.immortal Fangs
(#) defiant1981 2009-09-13
Like this story and the way it is developing. Please dont expand his hand maidens to to big a number perhaps that magic no 7?Author's response
If you mean handmaidens like Bella, right now it looks like he will end up with 3, if you mean friends there will be Nev, Susan, Tonks and Hermione most likelyimmortal Fangs
(#) marshall88 2009-09-13
really good , along time since i have read anything this good on this website.immortal Fangs
(#) Cateagle 2009-09-13
Now that was quite the interesting chapter. I wonder how the Deeters will feel when they find out that Bella is no longer the slave of "Flight from Death"? I rather suspect things are going to get very, very interesting.immortal Fangs
(#) dunder41 2009-09-14
thanks for anouther good chapter in a good story hope to see more of it soon. want to see if nymphy gets harry to claim her to, and where it goes from here.
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(#) jokemasterx 2009-09-14
Yes finally another chapter; i love this story. Hope to see another one soon.immortal Fangs
(#) nympotter65 2009-09-14
Great story. I can hardly wait for another chapter. I really like this story. You saved the allied families and freed Bella. She is no longer insane. She saved Neville and was tortured by death eaters for it. The Longbottom Family in hospital, great. Looking forward to more soon.Author's response
Depends how you define insane... she is in some ways even more fanatical then she is in canon
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