- I really enjoy the way you wrote teenaged Lulu. She's so giddy and girlish and sort of geeky and awkward the way that such girls are - she's a bit too interested in Auron and a bit too ready to compare him to a tree. She's oh so poetic and everything is romantic. I think that's sweet and I am amused by the ordinary image of Lulu up to her elbows in dishsuds. It's the sort of thing that the game doesn't let you see. You'd think all Spirans subsisted on air and weren't made like normal human beings at all.
I enjoy the way that Lulu runs a critical eye over each of the party, itemizing their physical charms.
The comment about the names is an interesting detail.
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