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I'm Just A Ghost, Haunting My Own Life
(#) LyssaLa 2009-09-18
So good. So so so good! I'm SO happy that patrick is finally concious and pete didn't really suffer :) but I do hope that patrick will be okay after his little tumble there, more soon!?
Author's response
We'll find out more in the next chapter. But poor Patrick is so confused. Did it happen, somehow? If it didn't how did he learn so much? Hmmm...
Thanks for reviewing
Sas xI'm Just A Ghost, Haunting My Own Life
(#) charliexbrown 2009-09-18
Oh my goodness. That was so sad, and so brilliant! I really felt how desperate and upset Pete was, and the part where he was crying into his hands was so hard-hitting. Seriously, I'm all choked up writing this :3
How did Patrick get to the bottom of those stairs? Was he pushed? Did he just fall? Guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter to find out :D
-adds to favourites-Author's response
Wow! Thanks!! That's very flattering :D Thank you!
The stairs thing - this whole chapter links back to the first two chapters, where Patrick is sitting next to Pete watching the news report before going into the explanation of how it all started (chapter 2). He fell down the stairs as he hid from Pete in a doorway, as he was still too angry to speak to him. He leaned against the door only to find it was open and fell down a long flight of steps.
There is a vague reference to how Pete found him as he says 'He may even have heard the cry I let out as I pushed back against what I soon realised was an open door'
So, as he passed, Pete heard him fall and found him.
Thing is though - how does he know about PPP and Pete missing Ashlee and Bronx if it didn't happen?
More soon and thanks for reviewing!
Sas xI'm Just A Ghost, Haunting My Own Life
(#) Moonshyne 2009-09-19
Hi there Sas,
That first part with Patrick looking in on Pete was simply amazing I could really feel the pain, anger, desperation and sadness he was feeling. I really wish I could write like that. Simply amazing.
I guess Alice was right in that it was going to be a bumpy ride. I love how the first thing Pete did was apologize.
Poor Patrick so confused and even though he was in so much pain I think he was happy to be back.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!Author's response
You can't see me, but I'm shaking my head!
Don't you realise that I was thinking that I wished I could have written it better? Perhaps like you might have done? You're much better with the emotional stuff than I am. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad you thought it was so good, I really wasn't sure, myself.
Thanks! Will get on with next chapter now.
Sas xI'm Just A Ghost, Haunting My Own Life
(#) Emmsiebabe 2009-09-19
cant wait for the next chapter to be posted. love the story so far!Author's response
Really glad you're enjoying it! I'm about to start on the next chapter now. Hopefully won't be too long.
Sas xI'm Just A Ghost, Haunting My Own Life
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-28
Ha! Would the ambulance peoples really give Pete a valium? I could use one right now.. no joke.. XDAuthor's response
They probably wouldn't, but they probably would at the hospital.
Sas x
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