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• Wake Me Up When The Nightmare Ends

  (#) Moonshyne 2009-09-24

  Hey Sas,
  
  Well that certainly was a twist if I ever saw one.
  
  Wow Patrick has an evil twin brother that wants revenge and hooked up with the lunatic that was stalking Ashlee. This is way too cool.
  
  I wonder if Pete will catch on to their game or be their little minion?
  
  Great chapter as usual. I'm dying to see what you do with this.

  Author's response

  Yeah, I think this one even took me by surprise! I knew the blond guy was Ashlee's stalker, but the rest was unexpected!
  
  No one knows Patrick better than Pete, so it'll only take one slip up. But he's being careful. Thing is though, Pete may notice something's wrong, but will he really believe that it isn't him?
  
  More soon! Thanks again, as ever!!
  
  Sas x

• Wake Me Up When The Nightmare Ends

  (#) LyssaLa 2009-09-26

  Wow Sassy,
  
  That was so cool, where do you get these ideas? I loved it, and I NEVER expected that big of a twist! So awesome loved this chapter!
  
  And poor Pete, the sweetheart is being played with! And he thinks that his best friend is behind it all! augu I am in such suspence right now. You need to continue!!!!
  

  Author's response

  I have to be honest, I was just as surprised as everyone else when Patrick walked into Pete's makeshift cell. Originally, I thought it would be just those two guys but he just appeared!
  Then I was left with the dilemma of why and on a sort of slow drip-feed it came to me bit by bit. It's really odd when that happens as it really feels like it's not me writing!! Lol!
  
  Poor Pete indeed, but I suspect it's not just Pete who should be worried. Matthew is definitely thinking about 'friends' as in not just Pete and what about the deal he has with Ashlee's ex-stalker? He seems to think he'll get her and Bronx as payment for helping him. And meanwhile, poor Patrick's oblivious to all of this.
  
  There'll be more soon, but I'm doing the next chapter of Candles first.
  
  Thanks, as always, for the review!!
  Sas x

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