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A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) LyssaLa 2009-09-27
This was great. Thanks for the update, this story is by far my favorite on this site :)
So Patrick is going to join the fight? He'd better be careful, he was changed just a few hours ago after all; and Beckett is stronger than even Pete! What if his attempts at help do more harm than good? hmmmm.
ah! suspense!
Update soon please, I'm dieing here!
~LyssaAuthor's response
Wow! Thanks! That's quite a compliment! :D
Yes, Patrick is joining thr fight. Is he brave? Is he foolhardy? And even, is he evil? I haven't actually said on whose side he'll be fighting ;)
Thanks, as always, for the review! it's much appreciated!!
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(#) Moonshyne 2009-09-29
Hi there Sassy,
I wrote a review last night and for some reason ficwad didn't post it.
I love the intensity of the chapter from start to fininsh.
Your whole description when Andy was going for the stake was amazing. I was unsure if it was the stake or keys. It was hard to believe that he didn't trust his friend (or was he right). I'm so glad Patrick had no intenetion on dying (I hope).
And Pete and Andrea trying to escape also had me on the edge of my seat. I thought it was sweet that he was reassuring her about Joe. Pete thought he had it all figured out and then bam the whole covenant is there.
I'm happy Joe was there to rescue her she felt awful about leaving Pete behind. Now she knows how Joe felt leaving her behind of course that's why he's back.
So Patrick is going to join the fight I'm still kind of unsure which side he'll fight on I hope it's with Pete.
As always a great chapter that had me on the edge of my seat.Author's response
Heya Moonshyne!
It did actually post - you must have written it under review the whole story rather than the chapter as it turned up there instead. But, hey, I don't mind getting another!! :D
Yeah, the Andy/Patrick scenario will get a little more attention in later on - there will be some additional explanation. But, oh will Andy wake up with a headache and a half! Oh! I so want to tell you, but I can't!!!
Yeah, Pete was unlucky. His plan would probably have worked if Andrea hadn't spoken and Mike was able to raise the alarm. And Joe? Well, I imagine that at some point it's going to dawn on him that Pete was helping her, not killing her! But right now, he's just desperate to get her away.
And Patrick? Well, all I can say is that someone is in for a nasty surprise...
So glad you're still enjoying it!! i'll write more soon. In fact, i think I'll start now! :)
Thanks again!!
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(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-09-29
I loved it =) spectacular i cant wait for whats next!Author's response
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! The next chapter won't be long now!
Thanks for reviewing!
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(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-10-21
Erm.. Now I'm REALLY confused..
Did the chapters, like, get mixed up or something? Because in the LAST chapter, Joe and Andrea came home and found Andy weak and Patrick an escape' person...
UGH!
I'll just read the rest tomorrow.. or something..Author's response
Just to quickly reply to this one - Somehow the order for chapters 22 and 23 have been switched. I've corrected it, but FicWad hasn't updated it yet.
Thanks for all the reviews!! You've made me a very happy bunny!!
Sas x
ps - I hit review instead of respond AGAIN! It's very early...
Ah! Now it has - sorry about that!
Actually, no, it's still a bit dodgy going from 22 to 23 to 24 - the arrow buttons don't work, use the dropdownA Little Less 16 Candles... continued...
(#) areyounormal 2009-10-22
Just to quickly reply to this one - Somehow the order for chapters 22 and 23 have been switched. I've corrected it, but FicWad hasn't updated it yet.
Thanks for all the reviews!! You've made me a very happy bunny!!
Sas x
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