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• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) zilichus 2009-10-14

  For the harem Hermione and Tracy Davies
  
  For slaves Cho, Rita Skeeter and Pansy

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) azphxbrd 2009-10-14

  I like your story so far.If thier isn't any beyrayal of Harry then Ginny and Hermoine shouldn't be slaves.I think you should consider haveng Bellitrix Lestrange as a slave to teach Harry dark magic along with keepimg an eye on Voldemort's inner circle.He also needs veela magic so also consider Fluer as bonded mate.Whom ever you pick for bonded/slave keep in mind they have magical talents along with sexual attributes for your story.Thats all for now.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Elvorgen 2009-10-14

  For the haraem Hermione and Hanna
  
  For the slaves Cho and Lavander and have him use them as sex tools to get info and money.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) kitkat100 2009-10-14

  Great Start. I really love these Harry/Harem stories. Will Harry get Tonks' metamorphic abilities.As a slave you could have Penelope Clearwater Percy's girlfriend . Maybe if he gets annoyed with Percy he can make her his slave to get back at him. If you make Hermione just a slave prehaps she could try and resist the bond.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) stargatesg1fan1 2009-10-14

  A great story so far. I would like Hermione to be bonded. I'm not sure why she would be in the use and throw away category. As for a professor maybe Professor Vector could be an older version of Susan Bones.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) pacratjr1982 2009-10-14

  If you are going for powerful girls for Harry then my vote though it may be unpopular is Ginny as a bonded. I'll explain despite Rowlings bad job in writing her in the story she did place Ginny as the seventh child and since in Magic seven is a powerful number maybe that translates to a powerful witch. Which would add to his power in fact since she is not well written in the series who knows what powers she may have that Harry can get.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) psaid1 2009-10-14

  Depending on whether this is simply smut with no real plot or if it plotdrivenn smut the choices for the Harem could differ.
  Your own proposals for the harem implies that it is smut without real focus on the plot (as others before me have already pointed out)
  If you want a bigger focus on the plot, than Ginny is a must for the SSS since she has been identified as a powerfull witch.
  Hermiones position (SSS or slave) depends on whether making her a slave removes her thirst for knowlegde, since that is truly an asset that shouldn't be lost, and her abilities with magic implies that she is at least somewhat powerfull (though some of it could easily be through hard work).
  With Fleur In the SSS, I can't see what Gabby could give when it comes to power (if Veela powers even transfers through the bond), so at most she would fit in the slave bond.
  Parvati never struk me as powerful, and being twins they shouldn't have a big differens in power, only in dedication, so I would prefer them as slaves.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) maddsloth 2009-10-14

  The group you selected seems good I take though Tracey Davis or Hanna Abbott, also I am assuming the relationship between him and his slaves does not have to be sexual correct? If that is the case would be a good idea to enslave some male ‘enforcers, body guards, foot solders’ personally I would make Draco whore himself out to all the Slytherin males. That should end the Malfoy line.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) GrantLarceny 2009-10-14

  since there was no 'power'(unless you count the mighty expelliarmus) in the books this is good enough for me!

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) RyokoTenchi 2009-10-14

  add gabrielle and one of the Patils. i like Padma.

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