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• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) agnar1 2010-02-13

  no gabrielle, she's too young and the "oh she's a veela so older than she looked" thing is overdone and kinda silly most of the time.
  
  i don't get the only 1 patil twin, for 1 good reason, no matter how good of an actress, if 1 twin suddenly becomes totally devoted to harry, the other would notice the change, and harry needs to keep this as quiet as possible.
  
  susan bones is a good addition strategically, for her ministry connection, maybe help him get a bit of legal protection from all those fucking with his life.
  
  So i'm cool with your current choices, but think the final 2 ought to be either both patils (think of it, twins are awesome, add in tonks and it could be TRIPLETS!), or perhaps hermione and a professor to get some staff protection, shield them from snape and so on. A professor seems a definite choice, but if not hermione for 7th, then i think a lesser used character but one that can plausibly be smart/useful, unlike gabrielle, or lavander, one is too young, the other is an airhead, better slave material than bonded. His choices for the SSS should be based upon knowledge, intelligence, skills, and power, both magical and otherwise (political, financial...), not just on how hot they are, because there are tons of hot women around, and he can always enslave the hottest that don't meet the other required needs. Can't enjoy the benefits of the bonds forever if voldie kills him because he bonded hot, but dumb and/or weak witches.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) zilichus 2010-04-28

  i hope u have not given up on this story it is a great start i would like to see it continue hermione\vector SSS cho as slave

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) lycus 2010-04-29

  Hermione!!! of course, It doesn't matter how powerful some one is, if they don't know how to use their power. So he NEEDS Hermione.

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Celexs 2010-06-28

  Good start, I look froward to seeing what you have planned next. My votes for the two remaining Harem members are Hermione, Bellatrix, as for Slaves i say use and abuse Cho.
  
  Cel

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) crazyjim87 2010-08-17

  how about ading bellatrix lestrange to the harem?

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) firefang119 2010-10-16

  can you please update soon and tell me when you do
  

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Dragonlord27 2010-12-08

  I relay can't stand seeing Hermione with anyone else so Id like Harry to keep her

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) GoCanadaWBC 2011-01-09

  i like it slave fleur and bong a vampire, and a werewolf

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) aghoud 2011-01-10

  looks like a good story hope you update as for slaves or harem members why not tracey davies and hannah abbott

• Harry Potter and the BondNote

  (#) Selias 2011-01-13

  Hope you get the inspiration for this story again. Maybe get Narcissa Malfor as revenge against her shitty husband and son. maybe Bellatrix, too and force them to do some sister-on-sister action. Maybe have Tonks shift into his Lily Potter (or her younger self from one of the pictures Hagrid gave him) and have some pseudo-incest.

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