(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-11-06Oh my God that was amazing!
I can't even tell you how funny it was.. and you even had me going there for a second! But what Patrick said at the end was kinda funny.. and true.. "..you deserve it" or something like that.
Pete still really pisses me off.
But you need to continue, maybe?
Like.. Pete could get Patrick back? LoL
Author's response:D So glad you enjoyed it!I always worry with things that I claim are funny that they actually won't be - so I'm really happy you liked it!
(#) xPrettyInPunkx 2009-11-06Haha, this was hilarious! It fits perfectly with Pete and Gabe's on going prank war. I love it lol.
Author's responseIt's an idea that's been in the back of my mind for a while, but this seemed to be the ideal opportunity
Thanks for reviewing. Glad you liked it!
- Hi there Sas,
I thought this was a cool story line when I started reading it. FOB a delusion in Pete's mind. Then I read the "Gotcha" line and started lauging that was priceless.
Maybe you can have a prank war one shots like shehadtheworld does on MCR.
Author's responseThe original story idea was for something else and was supposed to be quite serious, but I thought a fun version would work quite well :D
So glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!
(#) ficfriction 2009-11-14Okay, for real, I bust out laughing and nearly peed myself. If that did happen to Pete, he would have it coming lol. Seriously, heart lady sas.
Author's responseLOL! I'm delighted you liked it!
I don't know if anyone noticed but the name of the clinic - Baas Portage is actually an anagram of Gabe Saporta ;)
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