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“who are you? What clan are you in? Or are you a rouge?” Darkkit wished he knew but had no clue what this cat meant. “wait…. Is your parents maybe…. Dead?”
-1Illiterate
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The Story Of Darkkiller
(#) lolkitteh 2011-02-21
um, sorry, but it is just a wee bit boring, poorly written, I fund a lot of grammar errors, and um... spelling errors... did you ever use microsoft word to check your writing? I'm just offering hints and tips. Not everyone is good at writing. Apparently, I am good(according to my friends and family) but I think that just comes from practice and in-field learning(reading books by great authors).
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