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• Romance

  (#) sickly_ill 2009-11-22

  I like where this is going. Though I'm pondering on the prolouge. A prolouge is supposed to be what happened before the story. It has to be told for the reader to understand the situation if necessary. Did Helena and Gerard know each other before everything went down? If not, then your beginning is wrong, and if so, then you should be fine. Sorry if it sounds like I'm a bitch, it's just I'm a perfectionist and I hate when people make mistakes. I just wanted to tell you. Update soon!
  
  
  
  XOXOX ANDREA. =}

• Romance

  (#) emo-girl 2010-08-01

  wow this is different, in a good way. please carry on, it's good

• Romance

  (#) rockstar55501 2011-07-15

  carry on carry on. i LOVE vampire love stories like the 1800s era

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