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Searching for the Power
(#) The_Resident 2009-12-27
A very interesting story and, for the most part, well-written. A few minor spelling/punctuation/etc. errors here and there, but nothing to really worry about. (I'm a perfectionist but most people aren't.) I do hope you continue with this fine story; I am really looking forward to where you go with this. P.S. I loved Malfoy getting 'slapped down'.Searching for the Power
(#) brandu 2009-12-27
And hermione opens her gob and spews (hey, I made a funny):
"And just where did you get a Phoenix? I hope you haven't enslaved one!"
Why is Harry (and the others) even putting up with her silly ass? She constantly thinks very little of Harry.
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