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• Searching for the Power

  (#) firelord 2009-11-29

  i agree it is short but still a good chapter you could at least have posted the lemon with it thou sigh all well thanks for sharing

  Author's response

  I thought about it...almost did it...but I decided I didn't need it and didn't want to overdo it.
  
  I apologize but you can look forward to a lemon again soon :)

• Searching for the Power

  (#) tenspeed54 2009-11-29

  Good, but short. Looking forward for the next chapter.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) Quackpotty 2009-11-29

  I enjoyed the chapter. This one sets up the next in a great way, provided it leads on from this one. I'm really enjoying the story so far, and look forward to the updates whenever they arrive. I can't wait for the climax coming up.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) BlueWillow 2009-11-29

  I enjoyed this chapter. I am not looking forward to this story ending. Good job. Nice ending of this chapter.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) Aznboy8 2009-11-29

  I personally enjoyed this chapter as it sets the stage for the next few. This could just be my imagination but this seemed a lot more forced than the previous one so if you are having trouble, try laying out the direction you want the story to go in

• Searching for the Power

  (#) Cateagle 2009-11-29

  Short but good and leading into lots more, including some smut from where this chapter ended (I do hope you're going to flesh out that menage a quatre somewhat for the more purient-minded among your readers (I include myself, here). I was rather amusing by the beat-down Hedwig gave Harry; I suspect he'll need to start negotiations with her before he next asks Fawkes to handle something for him.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) issabissa 2009-11-30

  another good chapter! keep up the good work!

• Searching for the Power

  (#) hptrump 2009-11-30

  Love your story but missing the smut scenes that have been in the story for so long that now it feels like the story is incomplete. Write the chapter like you did here, then add the smut scene.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) lighthawk610 2009-12-04

  I love this story, I've the last 4 day reading it, don't like that Harry cries so much and can't understand why he just can't peek into malfoy mind to find out what he doing, he a marked deatheater why respect his privacy.
  

  Author's response

  After being mindraped by Snape and finding out that Dumbledore regularly sifts through peoples minds, he decided he would not abuse his power like that.
  
  He won't read Malfoy without just cause, being suspicious of Malfoy is not enough for Harry to justify doing that.
  
  Its like peeking at someone changing clothes when you were abused as a kid...
  
  I dunno, I try hard to make Harry seem more real but I have to leave some inconsistencies in the story for it to be believable. Otherwise Harry would be omniscient and know exactly where to find all the Horcruxes, exactly what Draco is up to, and which of his girls are in love with him, he would read them, find out what love feels like, and know what love was.
  
  My harry is not a god, he is just a teenage guy who happens to have access to alot of magic, most of it is emotion based though. So he has to show emotion.

• Searching for the Power

  (#) socras 2009-12-21

  A very good story if i do say so. i just caught up and felt i is very well writen. i for one really am interested in what you've got planned next for this story. keep up the good writing.

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