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A Deadly Illusion
5 reviewsA twisted one shot about a blood thirsty Juliet and Gerard as her unwilling Romeo. Bella's memory stained in blood and rain.
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A Deadly Illusion
(#) SmashAuthority2 2009-12-07
This was AMAZING! Being in the obsessed stalkers head was pretty damned disturbing. I can't believe Gerard got killed but I read about stuff like this all the time. Well done. You kept it real. xxAuthor's response
Thank you very much!
Killing Gerard in the end was admittedly pretty hard on my part...I mean, the idea of his life ending like that doesn't really sit well with me. But then again, I knew what was going to happen next, haha ;)A Deadly Illusion
(#) mysilentromance 2009-12-07
Incredible can't even come close to describing how great and twisted this story was. Just...wow.Author's response
That's quite the compliment, thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.A Deadly Illusion
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-12-07
My goodness.. this has to be just about the best thing I've read today :) And that says a LOT, considering I read a lot.
Wait.. if there's a sequel.. Didn't she die at the end? Oh, never mind :) I suppose I'll find out if and when you post it xDAuthor's response
Thanks! Yeah, I see you reviewing on some of the stories I read too. It's great to hear from you on one of mine, I'm really glad you approve.
Yes, there's a sequel, which again I need to touch up because I changed a few key details of this before I posted it here. You know I'm just starting to wonder what the point of a sequel to a one shot is...oh well.
Anyway, by 'she' do you mean Kay, or Bella? Because yes, Kay died. As did Gerard. Bella on the other hand survived...and there's much more. You'll just have to wait and see :)A Deadly Illusion
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-12-08
I did, indeed, mean Kay ha ha :) Now, on to that sequel! I see it posted up there.. front page.. taunting me.. xDA Deadly Illusion
(#) VendettaEmma 2009-12-09
O.O Speechless. BRAVA! BRAVA! :-)Author's response
I thank you kindly :)
Very glad you enjoyed it.
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