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• Harry Potter and The Mind

  (#) DrT 2009-12-15

  Trying to decide who deserved it more, Draco or Hermione.
  
  I guess I'll go for Draco -- a ferret stomping is always good, and there's a better chance Hermione can learn from her mistakes while Draco may be back for more.

• Harry Potter and The Mind

  (#) dennisud 2009-12-15

  Draco definitely needed to become a human pizza. AS for Hermione, as t she came a close second. Now again 'as written'. I'm highly aggitated in how Hermione was written here almost as though she was a hermione-ish version of a 2 dimensional Ron Weasley.
  
  My other point was the fact that Ginny has done very little here to warrant Harry's favor, and I remember well how she hurt him as much as she did on HBP.
  
  Still I do like the way you have rewritten Harry's character as a take non crap kind of guy. Almost like another Harry, a detective from San Francisco!
  ;-)
  
  Overall a very entertaining story, i just hope this Hermione sees the light and why not much of Ron Weasley here yet?
  

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review. I see Draco as a spineless gob-shite; an ankle-biter of the first water.

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