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Disashi follows Travis' orders and finds himself in Rayne's office, asking for her assistance.
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The Setting Sun
(#) girlinthemoon 2009-12-15
I loved it! :)
So glad Google Docs worked for you . I'll come back and leave a better review when I'm n ot usei ng my phone to rfead it. Lol...Author's response
lol good ideaThe Setting Sun
(#) areyounormal 2009-12-16
Hmmm, so he told her that Gabe had been killed? Does he not trust her? Interesting! Now I'm wondering what is in that letter.
Great chapter, as ever, and looking forward to more. It's all building up!
Sas xAuthor's response
Keep in mind, as far as Travis and his guys know, Gabe had been killed. They didn't know that he is somewhere safe and she was just learning of the news herself so she couldn't correct the thought. And you will find out on Monday, when I post the next chapter what is in the letter =) Thanks for the review lady! btw, I replied to your emailThe Setting Sun
(#) girlinthemoon 2009-12-16
Ok, I'm not using my phone to leave this....
Hearing about Gabe must have been hard for her. Please tell me that she will find out the truth soon. I hate to think that my namesake is mourning for someone that she doesn't need to mourn.
The next chapter should be interesting when Travis and the boys show up at the house. But, will Rayne's letter be enough to make Pete and the guys trust them?
On a side note, I'd love to know more about Rayne's history. When was she turned? How did she get into business? You know, that kind of thing.Author's response
lol yay no phone.
And we'll find out about her soon, I never thought of adding all that stuff in, but I think I should now that you mention it. And yes, I don't like her mourning either.
The next chapter is a bit interesting, I'll say that much about it lol. I'm going to work on her past soon =)
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