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So, I guess the question is, will Rayne's letter keep Disashi and Travis safe?
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The Setting Sun
(#) areyounormal 2009-12-21
As ever, I could see it all, feel it all, everything! Very tense!! :D Excellent!
Love it!
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=) Glad I did a good job lady! I loved the whole jaw breaking partially off part hehe.The Setting Sun
(#) girlinthemoon 2009-12-21
I'm @ work right now and can only use my phone to read and review.
But, I think I'm gonna love the next part. LOL... so glad Rayne is becoming a regular.
This chapter was as good and as well written as all of your work. Can't wait for next week!Author's response
lol of course you're going to like the next part it focuses on Rayne, well, you lol. And I'm glad you liked this update, things are out in the open now and now after my focusing on you chapter, I'm pulling you further into the story because you are going to be of some big big help soon =) But that's all I'm telling you lol. Thanks for the review!The Setting Sun
(#) girlinthemoon 2009-12-21
Oh, and Rayne became a normal character because you love me. :)
Author's response
Oh, is that why? lol Oh yes, I suppose it is hahahaha
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