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Broken
(#) InuKag 2006-05-15
OMG did NOT see the pregnant thing coming... haha, nice.. you should add on to this.. you can... you can actually add on without using another song.. although you have used songs that make complete sense and that's always good. You should add some more thereafter about what Inuyasha thinks about this and what happened because you never really imply that they even slept together until that very point. so i would really love to read the sequal and i look forward to reading it... keep meh updated kk?Author's response
"You should add some more thereafter about what Inuyasha thinks about this and what happened because you never really imply that they even slept together until that very point"
nah, thats what the sequel is for! i'm really glad u liked this, and reviewed a LOT. i love getting reviews, especially like urs which also contained constructive critism. and i'm glad i surprised u with the pregnant thing, thats EXACTLY the reaction i was hoping for (and i got that same reaction a lot on fanfiction.net too!)Broken
(#) fruit_addict 2007-04-05
good story. I liked how at one point you used a line in the song for in your story. If that makes sence. Although I never really have liked the pregnancy as a surprise ending. Never has been my favorite, not even in smallville and that's saying something. Check for spelling mistakes again.
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