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Rayne makes it over to the compound after Pete's urgent phone call. What was so urgent after all? And Salcido has a few words for the group of hunters he was planted in.
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The Setting Sun
(#) areyounormal 2010-01-11
Ha! Form an orderly queue! I bet they ALL want to kill him!! Maybe they should all have a go - bit of target practice - and a prize for the winner! Do it slowly, he deserves it! (if they have the time)
Great chapter, but I always want more!
Sas xAuthor's response
I'm sure they all want to kill him, and I think I like your idea of target practice, but I also like the idea Rayne posted below lol Which should I pick? hmmm... And we'll see how things go in the next chapter, on the 18th. =) Glad you liked it lady!The Setting Sun
(#) girlinthemoon 2010-01-11
Gabe should get the honor of draining him. I mean after all, he is recuperating. I'm sure he could use the blood.
Great chapter. And I have to say, I really like how you're writing Rayne. =)
Author's response
I'm glad you like how I'm writing her, I'm trying to keep her as accurate as I can lol. And you know, I like your idea and yet I like Sassy's idea lol I'm going to pick one but I'm not sure which one I'm going to pick lol I actually haven't written past this point, I hit a block which will hopefully be cured by the 18th when this is due again. I even hit a block on the one-shot I'm working on with you in it lol. It's bad.The Setting Sun
(#) girlinthemoon 2010-01-12
Sounds like you're having problems writing me. LOL... I'm sorry.Author's response
You're forgiven, I'll let that one slide lol.
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