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Castle

by Mikari 2 reviews

Near likes to build castles with his blocks but he always knocks them down. Why did he decide not to knock down the castle this time? (Near+You)

Category: Death Note - Rating: PG - Genres: Romance - Published: 2010-02-16 - Updated: 2010-02-17 - 1129 words - Complete

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Castle

(#) Shadowvixen49 2010-07-23

Awww...
That was really cute. I loved the way you made it about 'you'; that was really well-done.

Just be careful. In the third paragraph, I couldn't understand the last sentence; seemed like a run-on.

But that might just be me.

Keep Writing!
Author's response
thank you! :D
Castle

(#) Delicately_Maybe 2010-07-26

SO adorable!!
Author's response
thank you ^^

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