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• Truth or Dare

  (#) snapehater 2010-02-17

  good story i would never of thought of this type of story. well done i cant not wait to read more

• Truth or Dare

  (#) fic_reader1 2010-02-17

  the thoughts are nice every once in awile but for me it distracts from the story when they are used to offten but that maybe just me

• Truth or Dare

  (#) jabarber69 2010-02-17

  WoW, aren't girls something!?! and why not Hermione are you not doing a stripping dance for Harry!?! this is a cool story!

• Truth or Dare

  (#) torgrim83 2010-02-18

  Hey,
  Interesting star, the dialogue however does feel particularly stiff in this story. However you did get better in the second chapter. Perhaps try reading it out to yourself, or something along those lines to help with that.
  Keep it up!

• Truth or Dare

  (#) GinnyMyLove 2010-02-18

  First: I love TorD and played often from 9-20 with fun/mixed results. I love the idea of this story and I find it very hard to imagine any Harry relationship that does not include a very intimate Hermione.
  
  Second: I agree with some of the other reviewers. You got better in the second chapter but you need to pick a view (i.e. first person, second person, third person, etc) and stick to it as much as possible. The thoughts interspersed are fun and do add to the story, but too much jumping around feels disjointed. Maybe try writing one chapter at a time, from each persons point of view?
  
  Third:
  
  I suggest hpfanficarchive.net as an alternative posting site especially if you might get nc-17 at some point.
  
  Fourth:
  
  The reason I suggest an alternative site. FICWAD.COM Domain is up for renewal on the 5th of March 2010. That is 13 days from this review; looks like dreamhost might give a 2 week grace period but there has been NO response from the site admin/owner in years and I am rather scared ficwad.com is going away in a month.
  
  Keep it up, I will read it. You may be a bit disjointed but so far you are still better than some hack-writers and your spelling and grammar are not lacking. I know my first fic was "off" for the first several chapters but I got better; you will too.
  
  More More More please, even if its somewhere else on the internetwebs.
  
  GML

• Truth or Dare

  (#) Wtdra 2010-02-22

  BACK UP THIS STORY

• Truth or Dare

  (#) ficbob 2010-02-23

  Quick start. But fun. Looking forward to more of this fic.

• Truth or Dare

  (#) Morally_Challenged 2010-03-01

  Great start and a good hook to get things started.I look forward to reading moor soon.

• Truth or Dare

  (#) Shwing999 2010-04-25

  Fantastic. The girls are pretty much the only two in the books that i thought Harry could ever end up with, so this story is perfect. Looking forward to reading more.

• Truth or Dare

  (#) MrNightflame 2010-06-22

  A notion for you to consider - a flashback to Hermione and Luna planning the 'Truth or Dare'. I don't see it happening spontaniousley, but if they were following a plan, a good for Harry plan, then I see 'it' happening.

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