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A lethal Smile
18 reviewsMy name is Harry, and I started life alone in a cupboard. Then I made a wonderful discovery; all of life is a joke! This is my tale of a twisted Hogwarts filled with Riddles and Scarecrows. Dark Kn...
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A lethal Smile
(#) red_jacobson 2009-09-05
Now, this, this is interesting! Very curious to see how you develop the rest of the story. I can see Neville as a pseudo Poison Ivy, and of course, our lovely Luna is the perfect Harley Quinn GRIN
redAuthor's response
Firstly, thanx for the review!
The story; well i don't have the whole thing planned out yet, but what i do have is fun and twisted as a pretzel.
now...
AHHH DAMN!
now I expected most people to expect neville to be a version of poison ivy... but i didn't expect anyone to nail down Luna yet! it makes sense... but damn.
hmm anyway... thats not a whole lot ruined...
I got two-face, riddler, scarecrow, ragdoll, bane, Mr Freeze... on top of joker, ivy and quinn. and that's just so far....
can't wait for the two-face part myself...
i;m not going to write first person from all of them, but as you can see... i got some stuff planned... muhahaha
-The Jade Knight/Argent909A lethal Smile
(#) tumshie1960 2009-09-06
Very nice start, but in the UK we don't have SWAT Teams, we have the Firearms Unit or Tactical Response, we don't measure distances in blocks, we talk about streets away and we use pounds not dollars.A lethal Smile
(#) Stroth 2009-09-06
Loving this story. And I can't wait to see what you do with the other HP characters. Obviously Draco is the Bat, but who else. Hermione the Riddler, Nevile for Ivy, Luna for Harley... Bane for Ron after a potions accident perhaps? Whatever it will be, I'm sure I'll enjoy it.A lethal Smile
(#) harryandginnypotter 2009-09-06
Great start to the story so far, absolutely loving it. Definitely was thinking of Luna as Harley while reading.A lethal Smile
(#) discipleofyorae 2009-09-07
very nice. good pacing and development. I quuickly saw the Luna Harley connection as well as Nevile poison Ivy. the more that I see is Remus Lupin as two face with his left side stuck in a permanent transformation, maybe he could have an ancient roman coin with romulous on one side and remus on the other. My prediction for scarecrow is Sirius learned to harness the power of the dementors while in azkaban though it could also be bellatrix. Bane. hmmmm.... bane. bane. bane. very complex character and brute strength doesnt really matter much in the wizarding world so I imagine venom turning him into a magical dynamo with some inhanced physical abilities. I'm thinking Snape for that one since it would need to be brewed in secret. I have this odd Idea for the one we know as Voldemort as Raz Aghoul, an ancient evil presence that has been hoping around the centuries in other peoples bodies. the real Tom Riddle planned to be Voldemort but in his search for Immortality came across Raz and lost the battle for control. now he needs a new body and is interested in Harry. the Diary might be the only horcrux of Tom Riddle and without heroric Harry to save ginny, old tommy boy just might make it back and then you know what they say about the enemy of my enemy.
oh and I have one more Idea but it's pretty lame. Hermione as catwoman. pureblood prejudice is so great that they even restrict what classes muggleborns can take so she decides to just take the knowledge from them, Harry might use her to steal things he cant get to. it's my pathetic attempt to include Hermione sice she's my favorite character and I'm a forever Harmonian. though if she did become catwoman she would go towards Draco insteadAuthor's response
ello!
thanx for the review, now a few answers.
yeah it seems like luna and nevile are the two that i had planned originally, that everyone seem to expect... i may have to change that.
now remus... hmmm thats a very good idea. i especially like the coin part. but as of right now i got plans for both remus and twoface, but they are not one and the same.
sirius; another very good idea, and in all honesty i was toying with it for a while, you really made me think. but so far i'm still gunna stick with my first inclination.
bane; again nice idea, but i want to leave most of the teachers out of it.
Tommy boy, like alot of the key pieces of the potter verse are going to stay the same, its only harry and a select few others that change, and thus, changed everything around them.
ohhhhh, i like the Hermione idea. and yeah, i am sorta planning on the catwoman-person going after draco. so no hermione; i am also a harmonian, but i also like ginny. she will also have a place and it wont be bashing. a little growling and gritted teeth? maybe.
anyway nice ideas!
they're really helping my process; to see what everyone wants.
later
-Argent/Jade Knight
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