- This story was spot-on for me. Sora and Leon's voices come across wonderfully. The little sections with Donald and Goofy didn't feel forced at all and that's a big problem for me when reading stories that include them. I also thought this was good examination of some of the things the game doesn't really deal with at all. It adds a lot of the realism that's otherwise lacking. But, my true love for this story comes from the Sora-Leon dynamic. I love this. I rarely find it done so well. This was an excellent story.
- Oh, this was lovely. Totally in-character for both Leon and Sora, and just OMGYEY for the whole big-brotherly vibe you had going. I also love the teensiest references to FF8, or at least the characters in it, and also the bits of Donald and Goofy being themselves (and Donald's air-freshener wand XD).
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