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Fatal Facination
(#) Fantasy_Fairy 2010-03-18
Poor Alyn. Even though it's Gerard you made him sound so repulsive! Well done!!
If she didn't think she had any hope, she would not play the game right. She would quit trying, like all the others. So! Does this mean that all of this 'you're so different' is just an act he uses on all the girls to see if they will fall in love with him? What IS the game exactly, and how do you win?
He felt her mouth quiver, He told himself that she was doing it because she wanted him...what he had always wanted, A girl screaming for him, no one else. Even though Gerard's a serial killer, and i wouldn't actually be saying this if he character was real - i do feel a tad sorry for him. It seems like rejection and the need to feel loved triggered him. He has one dark mind though, i will give him that! But he is so desperate for Alyn to want him, its pretty sad. He's obviously been pretty damaged; im guessing it stems not oly from the first girl he killed, but what happened at home! [Did Mikey not know about this??]
Excellent, more soon!Author's response
I know! It's almost like you can't help but feel sorry! I plan to put more on how his.. mind, got the way it is, into the story.Fatal Facination
(#) mysilentromance 2010-03-18
That filthy whore! (Not Alyn - the other girl) Just look at the monster that she created. It's sad; it really is. But as sad as it is, it's still not an excuse for killing the innocent.
I know I've told you this before, but I want to say it again - Gerard sounds like he could be a real serial killer. Being that he wanted to be "sexual" in this chapter made him very realistic. Because have you ever noticed that a lot of killers are pervs? They're into porn and raping women/dead bodies?
Oh geez, I might just be the one creeping you out now...Author's response
I figured I should put in the more, sexual part of a serial killer in there. I am not sure if I should put in a sexual part, other than the groping and stuff, idk how you guys would feel bout it, but Lemmie know! Nah its not creeping me out! I mean I have done plenty of research, Most want the power of having one person submissive to them, unlike Jeffery Dhamur,with his dead body fetish cringesFatal Facination
(#) GoddessFire 2010-03-18
Holy crap! Ok I think I say that everytime I review but man! He gets twisted even more every chapter! But I love it, I wonder if he is going to actually fall for her, like b/c she plays the game and maybe in the midst of the game he really falls for and keeps her locked away like a hermet would..... Ahhh I just cant wait for another chapter! And no I wasnt creeped out by this chapter! Xoxoxo ~NatalieAuthor's response
I am glad you are enjoying how he his turning out! Although I feel bad it is Gerard now hahaha, but! such as life. I have a feeling Alyn might acquire Stockholm Syndrome. It works both ways.Fatal Facination
(#) endofmylife 2010-03-19
gah! you have to update again!
great story :DAuthor's response
thanks so much for enjoying this!
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