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• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) fic_reader1 2010-03-27

  glad to see that you are back the sight will be just fine so im looking forward to more.

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) Ryudo3 2010-03-27

  It was a OK chapter. But I do think you should add a Slythrein and I think maybe harry should be with Tracey Davies and Daphne Greengrass.

  Author's response

  Um.
  Harry was with Daphne first...
  
  I haven't finalized who Harry will be with yet for sure. Mostly, but not totally. :)

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) nimistar 2010-03-27

  ok, i have seen dobby the military man, dobby the butler, hell i have seen dobby the pothead. i have never seen dobby the pimp, good job on that one.
  
  cant wait to see what you do with fleur/laura.

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) dsbbooboo 2010-04-03

  I think it would be interesting if you actually used Madame Maxine as one of the girls. It would be strange, yes, but definitely unique.

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) LabRat 2010-04-12

  Does Dobby have to smack a bitch?
  
  The descriptions of Pansy were disgusting.
  
  Pimp Dobby was hilarious, and Harry should have known that he wasn't to touch the Pimp Juice.

  Author's response

  Good Disgusting?
  
  or Bad writer, poor style disgusting?
  
  And yes. Yes Dobby had to smack a bitch. She was mouthing off.
  
  Honestly, the whole elf thing always smacked more of pimp/prostitute vs master/slave to me.
  
  But the pimp is so strong, the ho's smack themself...

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) MrPowell 2010-05-12

  Ok... I'm gunna vote that that chapter was just disturbing all around... wow...
  hopefully Fleur will balance things out next chapter

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) Celexs 2010-06-26

  This is great, I couldnt help but laugh at dobby. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
  
  Cel

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) goldrune09 2011-03-01

  Can't wait until Fleur next chapter!

• The Unmentionables...?

  (#) LabRat 2012-06-07

  Definitely good disgusting. Your ability is not being called into question, Pansy's attractiveness however is very suspect.
  
  Also, I probably should have put this on the Susan chapter, but I didn't think of it until now. That potion that Hermione gave him, I thought it was a contraceptive at first, but after what happened with Marietta and Susan, I'm beginning to think it was a potion that gave Harry's semen/sperm healing properties.

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